I was very proud of the feedback that I received during this feedback class. I also enjoyed seeing the different approaches that my classmates took and how some people took different approaches to me which was very interesting. critique classes are vital to getting peer feedback and lecturer feedback and will further improve my project.
I got minimal feedback which was to remove the second name as it was duplicated on each screen and remove the larger icon on the edge of the screen which made it cleaner and less cluttered. i removed these design choice for all of the screens making it cohesive across all of the doffent pages.
i also had to change the bubble chart which i previously discussed, but i think that this turned out better as i was able to add more information for each of the sections. overall i am pleased with my dashboard.
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<aside> 💡 The critique lesson went very well, I had minor changes which where to remove the button and the names form the top right hand counter as there were duplicates I think that this made the dead board screen less cluttered. And the final change was to the bubble chart which was to change the appearance and have information on the outside and when pressed more detailed information come up, I thought this was successful but I also thought that I could have implemented this a bit more by maybe adding icons for the apps. Also look at the dashboards around the room helped me get feedback from others but asking and insight on what the others were doing for the brief and I could make suggestions on what they could change to further improve the dashboard
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